Friday, April 17, 2009

6 sentence story

I was told to write a story in 6 sentences. to train me to write concisely. thought I'll show it to all of you.


I thanked the bus driver and reached into my pocket as I left, expecting to find the familiar bunch of house keys.

“Oh no, not again.” I thought as I searched through my three other pockets and discover only my mobile phone and some crumpled tissues.

“Where did I misplace it this time? Did I place them back in my pockets? I swore I remember taking them!” Thoughts raced through my head as I stood frustrated in front my house gate.

I sat miserably at a corner and waited for my aunty to return two hours later only to find that the door was unlocked and my keys were kept in one of my hidden pockets.


it's not a true story. i'd rather walk to the supermarket kai kai a little than to sit down there for 2 hours..

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